Truth is a treasure-trove

Rare and precious –

Un-mined, un-cherished –

Tucked in a chest,

Hidden to the masses.

(Lesson 2, writing201 (poetry)  Acrostic, simile, gift)

About oneta hayes

ABOUT ME Hello. To various folks I am Neat’nee, Mom, Grandma Neta, Gramma, Aunt Neta, Aunt Noni, Aunt Neno, and Aunt Neto (lots of varieties from little nieces and nephews). To some I’m more like “Didn’t you used to be my teacher?” or “Don’t I know you from someplace?” To you, perhaps, I am a Fellow Blogger. Not “fellow” like a male or a guy, but “fellow” like a companion or an adventurer. I would choose to be Grandma Blogger, and have you pull up a chair, my website before you, while I tell you of some days of yore. I have experienced life much differently than most of you. It was and is a good life. I hope to share nuggets of appreciation for those who have gone before me and those who come after me. By necessity you are among those who come after me and I will tell you of those who came before. Once upon a time in a little house on a prairie - oops, change that lest I commit plagiarism - and change that “house on the prairie” to “dugout on the prairie.” So my story begins...
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12 Responses to TRUTH

  1. Debbie L says:

    Wonderful …. And true! Lol

  2. Hayley says:

    Wow – your last line was very powerful. And, ironically – your words holds much truth. Stunning xx

    • oneta hayes says:

      Hayley, I wrote a comment to you earlier, but I see it is not here. I don’t know where I put it but it is not here. Maybe I didn’t hit the post comment. Anyway, if you get two that will be fine~ Just double thanks. I appreciate your response. And I can tell that you also would like to see more people really look for truth. The truth I seek it Jesus who said he is Truth.

      • Hayley says:

        I received a lovely comment from you on my poem 🙂 I’m glad you are also asking part! And you are spreading the message of truth wonderfully, which I think is just splendid xx

  3. Megan says:

    I love it! This was so deep…especially the last line. Truth is a treasure, usually hidden.

  4. Love the last line especially, well done!

  5. dawnlizjones says:

    Nice, nice!! I retweeted as “Can we really know truth? YES!” I just updated my blogroll and add your wonderful site. Thanks for being the influence you are on the web!

  6. oneta hayes says:

    Thanks so much, dawnliz, you are so encouraging. I’m honored to be included on your blogroll. I have checked it out previously. I’ll probably shoot over just to see my name! Now that’s something special for me!

  7. oneta hayes says:

    dawnliz, I went over but couldn’t find the blogroll. I’m pretty sure I have been there before (unless it was on someone else’s. How do I find it?

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