The dazzling sun gleam
Hampered my ability
To watch the sky show
The dazzling sun gleam
Hampered my ability
To watch the sky show
Faye on DOING IT MY WAY (freedom/bound… | |
seekingdivineperspec… on DOING IT MY WAY (freedom/bound… | |
oneta hayes on BENDING TO THE TIMES | |
~M on BENDING TO THE TIMES | |
Nichika on BENDING TO THE TIMES |
Faye on DOING IT MY WAY (freedom/bound… | |
seekingdivineperspec… on DOING IT MY WAY (freedom/bound… | |
oneta hayes on BENDING TO THE TIMES | |
~M on BENDING TO THE TIMES | |
Nichika on BENDING TO THE TIMES |
I love the irony in this one. Very nice.
Do you suppose the sky walkers would have detracted from the sun show?
Oh! I didn’t even click the link. My comment was based on just the haiku itself — I thought the link was the title. 🙂
Are we lost? I was pointing to the fact that the sun is a dazzling sky show that we do not recognize for the amazing sight it is. The haiku content is that the dazzling sun hindered the sky walkers show. Which is really more impressive if we had never seen either before? The sun. How much we take for granted. My subtlety is too subtle, maybe? I will join the ranks of great poets if I continue writing in such a manner that one misses the point! I’m laughing at myself. In truth I never thought of such thing until you made the comment. Once you did, I thought, “Well, what do you know. I’ve been hit by a stroke of brilliance.
beautifully captured!
mine is here
https://daintypetals.wordpress.com/2016/07/06/dazzle-for-ronovanwrites/
I checked it out. Very nice. I’m sure I will be seeing you more often on Ronovan. Come back soon.