Oh, Mister Full Moon,
You know you’re only fake light
Coming from the Sun?
TJ’s Challenge Haiku using full and only
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ABOUT ME
Hello. To various folks I am Neat’nee, Mom, Grandma Neta, Gramma, Aunt Neta, Aunt Noni, Aunt Neno, and Aunt Neto (lots of varieties from little nieces and nephews). To some I’m more like “Didn’t you used to be my teacher?” or “Don’t I know you from someplace?” To you, perhaps, I am a Fellow Blogger. Not “fellow” like a male or a guy, but “fellow” like a companion or an adventurer. I would choose to be Grandma Blogger, and have you pull up a chair, my website before you, while I tell you of some days of yore. I have experienced life much differently than most of you. It was and is a good life. I hope to share nuggets of appreciation for those who have gone before me and those who come after me. By necessity you are among those who come after me and I will tell you of those who came before. Once upon a time in a little house on a prairie - oops, change that lest I commit plagiarism - and change that “house on the prairie” to “dugout on the prairie.” So my story begins...
Oh No … Don’t tell the moon ..!
No, he’s still in the dark! 😀
🙂
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Thank you. I’m checking you out for this week. Thanks for the opportunity.
This is lovely!
Thank you.
Love the humor in this haiku. Nicely written, Oneta.<3
Thanks, Olga. I like haiku but I probably do not write the kind that real Japanese intended!
I don’t either. Someone once called my haiku a senryu.
Hum. You sent me to http://startag.tripod.com/HkSenDiff.html which is supposed to tell the difference. I gave up there also. Their haiku consists of all sorts of syllable and line combinations. I’ll just stick with T.J.s suggestions. But thanks for giving me a new word. 😀
Beautiful image that enLIGHTens your talents!! Hugs n’ blessings for sharing them with us!!
Aw, you are creative with your words! Thanks. I’m tempted to do a blog following this about the light in or lives being only a reflected light of the Son. I would call it “reflected” light – I couldn’t with the haiku. Had too many syllables. 😀