My last breath finished,

I’ll be united with God.

A blissful future!


Submitted in response to Ronovan’s prompt words, “breath/unite”


And the prompt word “finish” by GirlieOnTheEdge.


About oneta hayes

ABOUT ME Hello. To various folks I am Neat’nee, Mom, Grandma Neta, Gramma, Aunt Neta, Aunt Noni, Aunt Neno, and Aunt Neto (lots of varieties from little nieces and nephews). To some I’m more like “Didn’t you used to be my teacher?” or “Don’t I know you from someplace?” To you, perhaps, I am a Fellow Blogger. Not “fellow” like a male or a guy, but “fellow” like a companion or an adventurer. I would choose to be Grandma Blogger, and have you pull up a chair, my website before you, while I tell you of some days of yore. I have experienced life much differently than most of you. It was and is a good life. I hope to share nuggets of appreciation for those who have gone before me and those who come after me. By necessity you are among those who come after me and I will tell you of those who came before. Once upon a time in a little house on a prairie - oops, change that lest I commit plagiarism - and change that “house on the prairie” to “dugout on the prairie.” So my story begins...
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15 Responses to WHAT JOY AWAITS!

  1. oneta hayes says:

    Sorry to the GirlieOnTheEdge readers. I made a mistake by using this word in a haiku. It was supposed to be used in a six-word story. Hope you will get acquainted with Ronovan anyway. It is well organized and lots of fun.

  2. UP says:

    What a comforting thought!

  3. I am so eager for that day when He calls me Home. Lovely words you’ve written 🙂

  4. Welcome to Six Sentence Stories Oneta! No worries about the mix up 🙂 Hope to see you next week!

    • oneta hayes says:

      Hope so. I put you on follow with email notification so I won’t forget.

    • oneta hayes says:

      Hello, girlie… I have a Six Sentence Story “Requirements Matter.” However, I cannot find where to submit to your blog. Instructions say to “come back on Thursday” and link up. I find that the “green frog” link is closed. And I can’t find a comment zone. I’d love to join you if I could find a way! Help, okay?

  5. Mukhamani says:

    I think we all pray for this. Very nice haiku.

  6. Faye says:

    A lovely comment. A truth for those who believe no matter what the reason for the comment. Thank you.

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