Oneta 84

A spot of chocolate on my blouse

A spot of coffee on the carpet in the house

A spot of clouds in the sky

Promising rain when it is dry.

“Spot on,” a writers delight

When she’s worded something just right.

Hit the spot,

See the target, give it a shot.

Blouse to the cleaners, and I say,

“Can you redo this today?”

Shoulder massage, that’s the spot,

Rub a little harder, I like it a lot.


Taking a shot at hitting a hot spot.  😀

Prompt by Linda – just write whatever comes to you with little editing.  Stream of Consciousness Saturday

About oneta hayes

ABOUT ME Hello. To various folks I am Neat’nee, Mom, Grandma Neta, Gramma, Aunt Neta, Aunt Noni, Aunt Neno, and Aunt Neto (lots of varieties from little nieces and nephews). To some I’m more like “Didn’t you used to be my teacher?” or “Don’t I know you from someplace?” To you, perhaps, I am a Fellow Blogger. Not “fellow” like a male or a guy, but “fellow” like a companion or an adventurer. I would choose to be Grandma Blogger, and have you pull up a chair, my website before you, while I tell you of some days of yore. I have experienced life much differently than most of you. It was and is a good life. I hope to share nuggets of appreciation for those who have gone before me and those who come after me. By necessity you are among those who come after me and I will tell you of those who came before. Once upon a time in a little house on a prairie - oops, change that lest I commit plagiarism - and change that “house on the prairie” to “dugout on the prairie.” So my story begins...
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1 Response to HOT SPOT SHOT

  1. Faye says:

    Well done with this writing challenge.

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