“Just go, I can’t take this anymore.”

“Surely you don’t mean that,” Brian responded, as he held her close.

“Yes, go,”  

Sadly, Brian left. 

It was June 8th.  A date never to be forgotten. Two weeks since their baby was stillborn.

Stella declared she could not stand the trauma again.  She would prefer never to have loved than to have loved and lost.  She would never love again—not a child, nor a husband. 

“I’ll always love you,” Brian promised.  “You’ll see that’s true.”

Stella did see, every June 8th, for 17 years, his promise had been shown by a single red rose.


Written in response to the 100 word picture prompt hosted by Rochelle

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

About oneta hayes

ABOUT ME Hello. To various folks I am Neat’nee, Mom, Grandma Neta, Gramma, Aunt Neta, Aunt Noni, Aunt Neno, and Aunt Neto (lots of varieties from little nieces and nephews). To some I’m more like “Didn’t you used to be my teacher?” or “Don’t I know you from someplace?” To you, perhaps, I am a Fellow Blogger. Not “fellow” like a male or a guy, but “fellow” like a companion or an adventurer. I would choose to be Grandma Blogger, and have you pull up a chair, my website before you, while I tell you of some days of yore. I have experienced life much differently than most of you. It was and is a good life. I hope to share nuggets of appreciation for those who have gone before me and those who come after me. By necessity you are among those who come after me and I will tell you of those who came before. Once upon a time in a little house on a prairie - oops, change that lest I commit plagiarism - and change that “house on the prairie” to “dugout on the prairie.” So my story begins...
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  1. Margaret says:

    Oh Stella. Big mistake. She shouldn’t shut herself off from love – no good ever comes of that.

  2. neilmacdon says:

    He’s persistent

  3. msjadeli says:

    Stella!!!! C’mon, give poor Brian a chance. Maybe it’s time?

    • oneta hayes says:

      I think she will acknowledge that she needs him before the 20th rose arrives. I hope so. Brian is waiting. No date has yet matched his Stella. I think persistence will pay off.

  4. Bill says:

    Wow. That is a long time to be so sad.

  5. notestowomen says:

    What a very sad decision. Now she will simply exist instead of living. Poor Brian. I hope she will eventually come around and ask him to go back to her.

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